Sunday, June 26, 2011

Lonely Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do you see that girl over there?
She sits at that corner with despair.
She cries and cries day and night.
Do you see that girl over there?
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Abby Dela Cruz
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Nice poem. I liked it. It was written well with great texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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