Asim Mahmood

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Thursday, October 26, 2017

Lonesome Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Drooping lifeless in my chair
Astray thoughts are at my care
Mind and body split in space
Can u hear the fate with timeless pace?
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Asim Mahmood

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 October 2017

An Amazing poem.. very nicely penned with scintillating poetic imagination with synchronized rhymes..10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2017

The clouds are hanging over your heart and silence is deafening the surrounding strain. This poem is thought provoking and thoughtful and amazingly penned.10

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Asim Mahmood 26 October 2017

Thanks so much Kumarmani Sahib! I am humbled.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 October 2017

fate with timeless pace, good one

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Asim Mahmood 26 October 2017

Thanks Mishra sahib!

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