night seems to be so long,
i am tried of pretending to be strong!
to leave you was my own choice,
from this pit now i cannot rise!
i can't stay away from you,
those scars just feel so new!
i can't forget the conversations over the phone,
to cry i am very prone!
but i know you won't be there besides me to take care,
our separation looks a nightmare!
night seems to be so long,
i am tired of pretending to be strong!
The opening and closing line....said it all...nice poem...keep it up
but seems it is toughest to change..! i hope i too change with the time..! thanks brother..! :)
It is not the strongest of the species that survive, nor the most intelligent, but the most responsive to change.....good poem litle sister.
night seems to be so long, i am tired of pretending to be strong! These lines capture the intensity of the poem Nice poems
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
@okoye Charles: thanks a lot..! :)