'Long Time' Later Poem by Me I Myself

'Long Time' Later

Rating: 4.3


how are you?
how have you been?

it's ben a long time
didn't see you since..... God knows when

do you remember the foolish dreams
we wished for..... back then

these were the best days.... right?
before the crazy life wheel began its spin

we were the closest... right?
do you know.............. i still have your pen

do you still have it?
the snowball with the snowmen

the one with the snow? ! ! ! !
and 2 little small men? ! ! ! ! !

remember? ....... there was a card
i wrote my name in? ! ! ! ! ! !

oh......you don't.........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! it's okay
NO! ! ! ..... my name is not Ben

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don't worry........ it's my fault
cause i thought....... i just thought

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Adamyan 10 February 2010

one sided love or... doesn`t matter how we name, but it`s so life like.good work

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Cherry Sha 17 February 2009

ohh.. very well crafted... memories and thoughts... its emotional.....recollection of a beautiful phase..

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