Look Away Comments

i think for a younger poet starting out you are doing just fine. but remember poetry isn't just fun to do. it's more of from the heart and your inner feelings. target something that really overwhelms your thoughts and just type away...don't worry about reading and altering till your thoughts have all been wrote..then proof read, adjust..spell check and put it out there...liked or not it is you speaking...and what you say is what matters..not the critics....good luck and good write......thanks for the read on this one... :)