Look Deep Into My Eyes Comments

Hi...u owe a nice way to express your thoughts...good poem But don’t use short forms in the poem

my possessed butterflies, Look above in the sky, Look deep in the blue sea, Look deep into dark night, Look, Look & Look deep in me, write on ur heart, heaven lives deep in the sea..... Very much poetic are your thoughts. I like your simplicity in using simple words. Very clear are the expressions.. thank you very much dear poet. Tony

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme from the heart. Thanks for sharing Bhat.