Looking Poem by Peter Neil Carroll

Looking



The ocean is sneaky, low waves, rapid
surges, a drawn backward suck. Crab-like
a breaker leaps, catches a woman stepping
in foam, snatches the top of her swimsuit.
She screams, hands jump to her breasts.
Children nearby gawk at her panic, show
fear. An older boy moves closer. Her friend
rushes with a towel, his voice soothing.
The kids turn, scatter, but the youth
stays, entranced. Man and woman retreat
to a blanket. She dresses, gathers her bag
and basket. The boy struck rigid, his face
a mask. He's done nothing but
look, seen. Her image riveted, indelible,
for him, for me, eternal.

Sunday, April 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: kids,soothing,woman
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