Looking In The Mirror Poem by Sandra Kelley

Looking In The Mirror

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Look in the mirror
I see, the past me


pretty
skinny
strong
unbreakable



Look in the mirror
I see, the girl slowly drifting away

tired eyes
bones
frail
breaking



Look in the mirror
I see, the girls almost gone

no more light in her eyes
unhealthy
tired
broken



Look in the mirror
I see, the girl gone

cold
heartless
exhausted
gone

Tuesday, July 30, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: mirror
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
sometimes hope and faith just isnt enough. well from my experance with abuse and being thrown around and treated like shit (yes i do cuss and no i wont quite)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 26 August 2013

keep up the faith girl. tomorrow will be better. keep on writing your emotions good work

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Khairul Ahsan 30 July 2013

People do not have time to take a look in the mirror as you do. If they did, they could see their own transformations. Thanks for the philosophical note.

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Sandra Kelley

Sandra Kelley

Waco, Texas
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