Looking Inwards Poem by ritty patnaik

Looking Inwards

Rating: 5.0


when i close my eyes
and look inwards
let my thoughts waft over,
like the clouds in the sky,
and suddenly,
i dwell in the light
the light of thyself!

i hold on to it,
from moment to moment'
not letting it move,
not letting it pass
my breath still!
that is the moment i cherish
out of all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 11 June 2009

I can feel the emotion between the words, I understand her deep feelings....10++

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