Looser Poem by josie mcmillan

Looser

Rating: 4.5


my heart is young and gray
it feels the leaves of autumn fall away
the older love and seasons bloom
when spring time comes
ill find love
im just a looser baby
my life is stuck on repeat
and im a failure lover
i know im never complete
with anything but ur love
your love...

Sunday, December 27, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,baby,seasons
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Craig Anderson 01 February 2010

Life Josie McMillan is what you make of it. You have a talent, now get to writing. lol Melancholy is cool but not from someone so young, go and grab it, whatever 'it' is. Regards. Craig.

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