Looser Poem by josie mcmillan

Looser

Rating: 4.5


my heart is young and gray
it feels the leaves of autumn fall away
the older love and seasons bloom
when spring time comes
ill find love
im just a looser baby
my life is stuck on repeat
and im a failure lover
i know im never complete
with anything but ur love
your love...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Craig Anderson 01 February 2010

Life Josie McMillan is what you make of it. You have a talent, now get to writing. lol Melancholy is cool but not from someone so young, go and grab it, whatever 'it' is. Regards. Craig.

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