Wednesday, September 3, 2008

Lord Forgive Me Comments

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Lord forgive me, for I have sinned
I’ve taking the most precious asset of your creation
And turned it into mayhem and disbelief
I’ve been mean and stubborn to those above me
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Octavia Tisdale
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Nathaniel Booker 05 September 2008

There is beauty in a confession, it is a cleansing of one's soul albeit until the next error, sin or whatever one chooses to call it. The intriguing part about it is that noone can cast a stone at you, for the 'Greatest Man Who Ever Lived' put it plainly, 'Let him who is without sin, cast the first stone'... you don't even have to cover your face because no one's throwing anything. Whether this is just something you chose to write about or your own experience, it's a bold move that paid dividends... keep writing dear friend... Be Well

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Greenwolfe 1962 04 September 2008

Well I've never read a confssion before, much less tried to comment on one. The thing that stands out about this to me is the comprehensiveness of the confession. She seems to be confessing everything. I guess that's what ought to be done. GW62

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