Naveen Choudary

Rookie (14 November 1982 / Chandigarh)

Loser Can'T Write Poems - Poem by Naveen Choudary

Sometimes I feel that its a way leading me nowhere,
will there be a start to my bright
But how?
I want to know how?

I will kill this ill in me thats filling

no no
sorry
its killing me to a sudden death
after another free fall, am unable to feel my breathe

Its benumb, a peace, a loneliness
after you loose, an another bruish on your face

It's hard, but I have to reach out, some how

for a torch that can enlight my darkest day
A day, a reminder date of my crucification
Am branded a tag 'Juss get out u failure'

You muss be saying
no no
not saying
but cursing me

This guy has gone insane

Is this a poem

When i stood to fight again
but still to no gain

When i churned to turmoil
But still success to me seems to be shrouded in foil

Then tell me how can I write

If you know
how to write when you are a loser

plz do mail me

thanks

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Comments about Loser Can'T Write Poems by Naveen Choudary

  • (11/24/2005 6:08:00 PM)


    Naveen,

    The title is a sentiment I could not help but agree with (Did you have anyone in mind?) . The poem certainly shows that you are no loser.

    Fantastic and original. only please watch your spelling.

    Regards,

    Denis Joe
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 24, 2005

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 24, 2005


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