Losing All My Trust In You Poem by Brittany Reedy

Losing All My Trust In You

Rating: 4.8


I feel the ground beneath me quake.
My heart gives way; i start to shake.
Then, i go to grab your hand,
But all that's there is dust & sand.
So here, i stand, without you now.
I've lost you, but i don't know how.
The ground begins to rip apart,
Dragging down my broken heart.
I'd rather fall into this pit,
And never feel another bit
Than live another day so fooled
By my empty heart, of which, you ruled.
So suck me in, eat me alive
It's better if i don't survive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stevie Taite 10 September 2012

You need to survive! You have so much to give! Your poems make my heart hurt! You capture your emotions and pain and spill it out in clever rhyme.

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