Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Losing All My Trust In You Comments

Rating: 4.8

I feel the ground beneath me quake.
My heart gives way; i start to shake.
Then, i go to grab your hand,
But all that's there is dust & sand.
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Brittany Reedy
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Stevie Taite 10 September 2012

You need to survive! You have so much to give! Your poems make my heart hurt! You capture your emotions and pain and spill it out in clever rhyme.

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