Losing And Living Poem by Payal Priya

Losing And Living

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Drop by drop
The ice melts to nothing.
Slowly the sun fades
And sets;
Minute by minute
I seem to be losing.
The blue sky turns black
The ocean dries
The season changes
Dark, cold winters arrive.
Minute by minute
Time passes and I stand still.
Watching the moving hands of the clock,
Staring at the grimy furniture
The thatched wall
Seeing patterns in the smoke,
My constellations are lost.
Minute by minute
I am losing all
Hoping there is His design in every loss
I am living,
Marching past every ground that I lost.

Tuesday, May 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: defeat,god,hope,life,loss,motivation,victory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 June 2017

The ocean dries The season changes Dark, cold winters arrive. marching past on every ground that i lost....... there is the shimmer of hope in your lines and the great decision of determination...... liked your thinking very very much dear poetess. tony

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