Weaving Dreams Poem by Payal Priya

Weaving Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Sun was overhead,
Burning all.
Her skin shone,
Through her white cotton saree,
resplendent and dark.
Sweat like pearl adorned her brow.
She washed utensils,
With ash and mud in her hands
Her pure eyes,
Weaving dreams.

Thursday, March 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,inspiration,work
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 06 April 2017

Beautiful poem singing the beauty of hard working woman. Loved it.

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Payal Priya 06 April 2017

Thank you ma'am for the lovely comment.Glad that you liked my poem.☺

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Dev Anand 05 April 2017

Her pure eyes, Weaving dreams. weaving dreams is a wonderful poetic concept......just beautiful. thank you very much.

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Payal Priya 06 April 2017

Thank you for encouraging comment.☺

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Rajnish Manga 03 April 2017

This is the picture of a traditional Bhartiya Nari doing her routine chores in her home. Nicely written.

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Payal Priya 04 April 2017

Thank you sir for reading my poem and appreciating it☺

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 April 2017

Through her white cotton saree! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2017

It is a beautiful inspirational poem having edifying diction.Many thanks my dear Payal, keep the ball rolling....10

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