Losing Grip Poem by Hannah Cooper
Losing Grip
my emotions i can't control,
jealousy, anger but mostly pain.
I can't understand how or why
i ended up this way.
She haunts me day and night,
I cannot move, i cannot fight.
im stuck, trapped in my head,
honestly i'd rather be dead.
You try your best to help,
but words are left unspoken.
im really sorry that you can't,
im unfixable and broken.
Im holding on, but im losing grip
How long will it be before i slip?
I like it; nice and smooth. However, I do think the first stanza puts it off a bit... The rest, however, especially the ending, makes up good for it! Keep it up, I know you can do better!
Im holding on, but im losing grip How long will it be before i slip? .............! ! ! age old dilemmas...done nicely in a poetic manner cheers :)
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4/25/2024 3:06:40 PM # 1.0.0.1119
very nicely written. such emotion! ! very good job!