Tuesday, June 18, 2013
Losing It Comments
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I no longer am the truth
They have been taking my youth
All the burdens and thoughts
All the miseries I sought
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Criscentia Jessica Setiadi
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Jim Jonson
19 June 2013
I like the style of this poem; with a limited number of words you could create a universal theme applicable for every human being. Your rhyme scheme is a mazing.
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3/16/2026 4:38:04 PM # 1.0.0
Thank you so much, Gajanan & Jim. Your comments have encouraged my to keep on writing :)