Losing It Poem by Criscentia Jessica Setiadi

Losing It



I no longer am the truth
They have been taking my youth
All the burdens and thoughts
All the miseries I sought

The greater the amount
The better was I bound
By the fake glory
Sinking all my worries

Soon emerge, I know
You reap what you sow
Yet before, I would've run
Under the flowers, under the sun

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this peom just 3 days after my 25th birthday. I realized how I wanted a new kind of life, a new story. Yet, something I've got to leave behind in order to follow the new path. My body clock is ticking, I need to make a quick decision.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Thank you so much, Gajanan & Jim. Your comments have encouraged my to keep on writing :)

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Jim Jonson 19 June 2013

I like the style of this poem; with a limited number of words you could create a universal theme applicable for every human being. Your rhyme scheme is a mazing.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 June 2013

Thanks, good write, I like it.

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