Loss Poem by dd mac mac

Loss

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How did it happen
what did it cost
friendship and love
thats whats i lost

i couldnt think
of the right thing to do
so i turned to hatred
thats all i knew

outside i was bad
mabye even mad
i pretended to enjoy this
but inside i was sad

now i i think
of my misery spent
of those who have come
and those who have went

but in time my mind
will make me find
they same kind of friends
and then
it will all happen again

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem is about love and loss,
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kay Tee 31 July 2013

Sometimes you may think you are happy because youre so attached and you love the person but they aren't good for you, as much as you want them to be, they aren't..

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Dave Walker 28 July 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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