Saturday, December 5, 2009

Lost Comments

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I'm lost
I don't know what to do
what do i believe
people are taking me apart
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Sierra Morrow
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Myron Clements 05 December 2009

This is an interesting poem. You are apparently arguing to yourself whether or not to trust other people, or things. I also noticed how, in line 3, you didn't capitalize 'I.' This could be a mistake, or it could contribute greatly to how you feel about people: you are unsure.

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