Lost Poem by Sierra Morrow

Lost

Rating: 4.5


I'm lost
I don't know what to do
what do i believe
people are taking me apart
with words, looks, and actions
I'm lost
what do I do
do I believe them
do I turn away
I'm not sure
are they telling the truth or just lies
I don't know what to do
I'm not sure what to say
do I believe them or
turn away

Saturday, December 5, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Myron Clements 05 December 2009

This is an interesting poem. You are apparently arguing to yourself whether or not to trust other people, or things. I also noticed how, in line 3, you didn't capitalize 'I.' This could be a mistake, or it could contribute greatly to how you feel about people: you are unsure.

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