Lost Poem by Derek Cole
Lost
I sit in the dark my thoughts swirling
The pain that you feel inside no one can understand
The love for family and longingness for a life you can never have
Feels like a knife being stabbed in you
Finally feeling that love you so longed for is hard
Pushing people to the breaking point to see what they can handle
They you find out that can't handle you and again your thrown back out
Into the dark all alone trying to find you way with the light from your heart
Maybe someday you will finally have the piece of mind you want but not tonight
I gave it a NINE. I really liked it. Very dark. Keep writing! ! S
I really like this poem a lot. There is a lot of emotion here. A suggestion would be to keep it in the first person form since that is how you start off, and just make sure all of the sentences flow easily. But other than that very good work!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 10:57:16 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Thanks guys it was the first poem I have ever written.