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Love comes
Passionate like fire
But your silence
Cuts like ice
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Marina Sofiah
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Chuy Amante 07 September 2017

special love ending as it always will ouch nice write

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Kwai Chee Low 14 July 2015

Lovely piece; perhaps the last line may sound better as My eyes till tears fall. Thanks for sharing, Marina.

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Marina Sofiah 15 July 2015

Thanks for your feedback Kwai Chee. It does make it sound more sad.

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Marina Sofiah 15 July 2015

Thanks for the input Kwai Chee. It does make it sound more sad.

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