Rose Bloodthorn


Lost In Their Firey Lies - Poem by Rose Bloodthorn

I can see the fire in peoples eyes but 
I'm the ashes left behind 
then I Hear the air whispers words of dispair 
But the earth that quakes shakes me down
 but I fall in the river that flows and passes them by and forgets all their lies 
But Once an ugly duckling transformed into a swan just as a lost spirit found out who they really were. 
Now that my lost soul has found it's way I realize the path I must take


Comments about Lost In Their Firey Lies by Rose Bloodthorn

  • Kelly Seale (6/27/2013 4:56:00 AM)


    You Go Girl! Never stop writing...it's something you're born with and just takes writing to master..the more your write the better you'll get..and you're pretty darn good! Also, the more you read of other's works..the better you''ll get. Read novels of all kinds, learn from the writer's craft, their prose... You've got It! Now let it grow! ; -) Kelly. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/15/2013 10:49:00 AM)


    Oh Rose how beautiful you are dear..love it..! (Report) Reply

  • (6/15/2013 10:49:00 AM)


    Oh Rose how beautiful you are dear..love it..! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (6/15/2013 3:07:00 AM)


    I realize the path I must take, good poem, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 15, 2013


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