Lost Lady Poem by David Brown Jr

Lost Lady

Rating: 5.0


I do stuff that make you mad or make you cry
But it got real when i saw tears come out of my eyes
Never knew it was you that brought me joy
Like a kid with a new toy
Like a man who got his first promotion
Like a fish with no sharks in the ocean
Like a little that loves to sing now leading Sunday devotion
Like a turtle moving fast instead of in slow motion
Like a sun that can shine all day without no rain
Like a butterfly flying free with you i feel no pain
This is how i fell when i have you are near
Now it feels like you have disappeared

Sunday, December 2, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly,fish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Toledo 02 December 2012

It's very nice David, you have some few mistakes in some words. But I like it very much? This is how i fell when i have you are near instead it should be This is how I FEEL when I have you near.

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