Friday, June 5, 2009

Lost Moments Comments

Rating: 3.5

My chance, our dance. The smell of your hair.
One night, just right. Only us there.
Two people, no music. Darkness all around.
Lights are bright, hands held tight. We cant hear a sound.
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Pauline McVicar
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sky dreams 05 June 2009

this poem gave me chills... it was absolutely amazing.. i could picture the whole thing in my head.. you can feel the sadness and longing, yet there seems to be feelings of acceptance as well. i loved it 10+++

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