Monday, April 2, 2012
Lost Soul Broken Heart Comments
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Lost Soul Broken Heart
I gave you my all and wait for a return
Yet you will never give in, never fall, never let go
I give you everything I have; I'm left with nothing but emptiness
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Brianna Winebarger
02 April 2012
A sad, but great melancholy poem. I like the way you describes things. My favorite line is, 'I give you everything I have; I'm left with nothing but emptiness' You did really well! Keep it up
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12/12/2025 10:04:42 AM # 1.0.0
Its a nice poem.. Love is somethings which cant be forced.. cant be faked... it is something that we live.. we feel, experienced.. and it can last for sometime or lifetime... Everything in this world happens for some good... Wait and watch...