Lost Voyage Poem by Talal Athar

Lost Voyage



I am the unsolved Triangle
You erased me from your solutions
I raised to be a problem
Gambling me, every one wabbles
I lost the battle
And its true
Wish it was unreal
I had my fears
Saved all my tears
Waved to all my dears
My heart's a sacred temple
The very that lost ocean
It's sailors now all gone
No charm in sailing along
Oh how could it go so wrong

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malaya Roses 24 September 2011

Sadness within this poem made me wonder such mature feeling in your teenage age. Sometimes love could hurts you till you could not describe the agony and the pain within your heart. Sometimes we might be wonder why we cry and love might giving a best way to heal but in this voyage, what ever left behind shall not coming back unless big we are ready to have a big turn and stop. Well done and very beautiful poem! ! ! !

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Talal Athar

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Islamabad, Pakistan
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