Talal Athar

Rookie (30-08-1994 / Islamabad, Pakistan)

1 2 3 I Want To Faint! 3 2 1 Please No More Pain! - Poem by Talal Athar

Big test coming on 9th
I cant get through this night
well, i need to sleep, that'd be nice
but, I'm too lazy for that and that is alright


Big fest coming on 9th
my time fights with a dark knight
the shooting star goes away and i think of my kite
i sit and wonder and wonder how it feels to be fine


Big night coming on 9th
the sun is about to rise and rise and there goes my shine
i take a sip of my history and digest a big misery
pain is my medal that drives my life through a broken pedal


Big storm coming on 9th
i sail in the sea of rewind
dear doctor inception! Fix my imagination
dear engineer exclusion! build a satisfactory sensation


Twelfth stroke coming at 9th
valley of 'after midnight pain' serves a new saint
1 2 3.. I want to faint
3 2 1.. please no more pain


Lost train coming at 9th
feat of folks that played a game
over the soul with a tortured betrayal
is also know as illusionist insane

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Comments about 1 2 3 I Want To Faint! 3 2 1 Please No More Pain! by Talal Athar

  • H - K (10/5/2011 10:39:00 AM)

    haha great poem, the rhyming is great. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 5, 2011



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