Trinity Augustin

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Love - Poem by Trinity Augustin

I treasure every moment,
Every second with you,
I smile then I laugh,
When im around you,
my heart starts beating faster and faster,
Our love changes for every season,
Love is our desire,
I love you,

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is about a speical person in my family that I love.I wrote this poem in my living room in a poem journal.I dedicate this poem to my favorite aunt.

Comments about Love by Trinity Augustin

  • Danielle Fraser (8/21/2012 5:55:00 PM)


    I saw your request to comment on your poetry. I might not be much help but I will give it a try and good luck! This poem is very usual, and striaght to the point. In todays world you need your own style to show everyone that you can prove something. Try something unique and funky, it might help your writing to expand. other then that this is great. Love is a fabulous topic to write about or sing about because everyone in the world can relate. It's a worldwide language that everyone is trying to understand. Keep up the great work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 17, 2012


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