Suzie ...Q


Love And Die - Poem by Suzie ...Q

They all tried to warn me
My family and yours
Yeah well darn me
Fell prey to your lures
What a jerk you are
Yet a bigger one am I
To go this long and this far
With such an idiot guy
Well live and learn
Love and die


Comments about Love And Die by Suzie ...Q

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/23/2007 11:49:00 PM)

    Miss Kimber has a point...imagery creates a decorum of capture...that said...you have a natural keeness for structure, which is everso important, if you want your Reads to read your Poems the way you would have recited them...This has a very smooth flux to it....Commendable work, young lady! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/23/2007 10:55:00 PM)

    i liked the poem just try and use wordss that express how you are feeling.. every poem is something to be proud of but with a little bit of heart you can make it something even greater than a memory you can make it something you acctully feel inside. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 23, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 5, 2011


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