Love And Die Poem by Suzie ...Q
Love And Die
They all tried to warn me
My family and yours
Yeah well darn me
Fell prey to your lures
What a jerk you are
Yet a bigger one am I
To go this long and this far
With such an idiot guy
Well live and learn
Love and die
i liked the poem just try and use wordss that express how you are feeling.. every poem is something to be proud of but with a little bit of heart you can make it something even greater than a memory you can make it something you acctully feel inside.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 6:22:04 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Miss Kimber has a point...imagery creates a decorum of capture...that said...you have a natural keeness for structure, which is everso important, if you want your Reads to read your Poems the way you would have recited them...This has a very smooth flux to it....Commendable work, young lady!