Monday, February 20, 2012

Love At First Sight Comments

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The first time I held you I wanted to sing
Your beautiful eyes my heart it did ring
Some people may say, it just can't be right
How can it happen love at first sight
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Gary Michaels
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 20 February 2012

Beautiful poem! I like the simplicity and as well as the word choice - the last line was very heartwarming! Wonderful!

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