Wednesday, April 24, 2019

Love Came Down From Heaven Comments

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Sin had done us in,
We had nowhere to go,
no hope, no way, it seemed alright,
Our backs against the wall,
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Jason Bartley
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 May 2019

Sin had done us in, > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > .PLEASE FIRST DEFINE WHAT IS SIN? THEN ALL WILL LISTEN SECONDLY ALL HUMANS FOLLOW THE SAME CHANNEL my lord YOU ALSO X AND Y COMBINE ALL KNOW YOU MUST ALSO PLEASE READ MY POEM USE YOUR BRAINS IT'S A MODERN WORLD TODAY

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 May 2019

Sin had done us in,

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Susan Williams 01 May 2019

Very good- another poem that might be the lyrics to a song with a tweak here and there! ! !

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Chinedu Dike 25 April 2019

Writing for the glorification and edification of our Lord Jesus Christ is the hallmark of ingenuity. A beautiful piece of poetry, well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing, Jason. Remain blessed.

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Jason Bartley

Jason Bartley

Chillicothe, Ohio
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