Friday, May 2, 2008

Love Like An Israeli Spy Comments

Rating: 5.0

She tells me that she’s fine
But she keeps her real emotions
Protected and confined,
She’s secretive like an Israeli spy.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Sandra Fowler 09 May 2008

I envy you that original title and the content of your poem does not disappoint. Love is sad. No one can convey that message better than you. Beautiful write, Uriah. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 03 May 2008

Your poetry always touches the heart of this reader. So glad I didn't miss this one that treads that fine line between the tenderness and the terror. Superb. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ernestine Northover 03 May 2008

Lovely write Uriah, split between two worlds, what a dilemma, but beautifully expressed. I really enjoyed this read. Thanks lots. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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