Love-Making Scene Tanka Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Love-Making Scene Tanka



on the screen
the love-making scene
fades to black...
I see summer stars
in my lost love's eyes

Saturday, August 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship,sex,stars,summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqua Flower 11 August 2018

Using stars in this piece definitely brings about pleasure to read period a nice tanka to describe love perfectly.

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