Love Me Two Times Poem by Alfred Ramos

Love Me Two Times

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When two men love the same woman
A lot of damage can be done
Especially if one is the father
And the other is the son
You can cut the tension that will be created
And the knife doesn’t have to be serrated
Each seeks the comfort of affection
But who will get all the attention
Even the best advise will not be heeded
What feats of wonder will be needed
One will bring her perfume and a rose
The other will enchant her with poetry and prose
Competition will reach the highest level
They may even make a deal with the devil
Compliments to her will come fast and furious
But aren’t you the least bit curious
That this event will only happen once in their life
When that woman is both the mother and the wife

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 19 September 2008

'One will bring her perfume and a rose The other will enchant her with poetry and prose' I liked the sarcastic humor in these lines...a neat and beautiful poem to read...congrats, Alfred 10

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