Monday, May 18, 2009

Love No More Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why are we drifting away
Like a dark cloud in the sky
Daydreams slip into the shadows
And no one knows why
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Alfred Ramos
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Marieta Maglas 20 June 2009

wonderful simile: ''Why is our love like a mirage That keeps evaporating away'' of a well written poem...10++

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Duh Huh 21 May 2009

I love the flow you gave this poem. Sometimes we can be so foolish with our decisions. Sometimes life is worth facing what we need to :)

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