Love Not Hate Poem by Hans Raj Sharma

Love Not Hate



Keeping an eye open on-
Looking as to who's there
Now, to love and support
Encourage or criticize, after mom-
To make me, a good human being.

A competition is very good in love
If to compete with self, none else
Efforts making to earn morality-
An ideal body and good health.

Fetching richness of every kind-
With hard work, not unfair means
For the motive, quality harvesting
A lot of care and attention is vital.

Riding the chariot is really tough-
Like wedding wells, chills and thrills
If intention is never a passion
Or the attitude isn't positive-
One can't find a chance to react to it
Jostling, with fake and time-waste.

Happy-go-luck, a pleasant surprise-
Towards a positive change in love-life
Persistence, empathy, self-discipline
Guts and confidence need to be imbibed
At a very young stage, as first rain of love
Maintaining its quality with strokes-
Strokes and blows of love, but not hate.
-Copyright © hrsharma ®2018
Ludhiana, Punjab, India.

Wednesday, February 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Happy-go-luck, a pleasant surprise-
Towards a positive change in love-life
Persistence, empathy, self-discipline
Guts and confidence need to be imbibed
At a very young stage, as first rain of love
Maintaining its quality with strokes-
Strokes and blows of love, but not hate.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 22 February 2018

Hans, such a lovely poem👍👍👍

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