Love Of Bullets Poem by darkpuppet loveless
Love Of Bullets
the bullet said bang,
it hit me and rang,
it hit me square in the head,
i felt the darkness i knew i was dead
he dropped the gun and stood above,
and spoke soflty 'i'll miss you my love, '
i loved him too but i didn't know why,
i was the one who had told him goodbye
this story ends with a plesant surprise,
as he said his goodbyes he had told me nothing but lies,
he picked up the gun,
and smiled the darkness had spun,
'i love you.'
Very deep expressive piece my lovely, you've painted a scene that most would come to know is the expression of (I Love You To Death) ....brilliant write...keep shooting them out...you've got a great talent
Love ends with tragedy would always be the greatest love as one can't tolerate the other.Good writes Breanna! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 1:45:44 AM # 1.0.0.1119
ZZzzzing! Keep those creative bullets coming, and don't forget to clean your gun. :) Favorite'd.