Sunday, February 28, 2016

Love Or Lust Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone in the desert
Left alone with my thoughts
My heart aches in a disquietude manner
Your face keep appearing like a banner
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Babatunde Micheal
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Jazib Kamalvi 12 March 2019

A good start with a great poem, Babatunde. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 February 2016

Your absence turns my hearts ablaze My heart craves for you You are all I got This feeling is so sensational and magical Without you life becomes darkness... love wonderfully pictured in the context of the desert and the loneliness. thank you very much. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2016

Glowing in my heart. Nice piece of work.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 February 2016

my heart craves for you, good one..

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