Love Pains Poem by bill panelo

Love Pains



why do you haunt my thought of pleasure?
its unfair how love corrupts the virgin heart.
pain and suffering is all one is destined for
with agony of the loss of their counterpart.
love deceives the heart,
but you are the only one that can trick mine

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Shane Clawson 27 November 2007

Yah it's coincidental that I am postin a comment, especially about luv. Grammer error: 'with the agony of the {LOSS} of their counterpart'... So far so good and thanx for the support. If you like check out my recently added poems and especially 'definition of divine luv' or 'oh mother'. Keep writing!

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