Love Story Poem by tyler gayman

Love Story

Rating: 4.5


As we walked hand in hand
Down the beach with our toes in the sand
Under the moon light
Your smile shinned so bright
Yet it still some how turned to tears
And we sat there and you told me your fears
From the day we met
I new id never forget
You’re my best friend
And ill love you till the end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ana Zaldivar 19 January 2009

i could feel you in this words. :) very well written :)

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Katherine A. Cheng 19 January 2009

There's an innocence in it that seems to make the world melt away. Good job.

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Jen Shearer 20 January 2009

The words you chose for this poem are very accurate :) You express yourself very well

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Dark Gurl 55 20 January 2009

ohhh tyler.. sounds like u truly love someone..lol perfect poem.. well done..

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Lisa French 19 January 2009

This is a really sweet poem. I like the way you write! You've gotta keep writing cause you sure are good at it! Great work, keep it up Lisa

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Danielle Bennett 19 January 2009

for being a new writer you are really good. so far i've liked them all keep writing.

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so sweet i like how you wrote this... A lot of feelings and hope in this poem KRista

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