Tuesday, January 5, 2016

Love Unequited Comments

Rating: 5.0

you came with love,
you went with hate,
you loved me so did i
i freeze and you fly.
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sudip niroula
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 July 2017

A great start with a nice poem on love, Sudip. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Gurleen Kaur Narang 24 July 2017

Empty promises nullifies itself.The way you express the universal concept of pain is very awesome.Thanks for sharing.10++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 January 2016

pain is to be felt, but, what about your love? ? shall i feel or guilt, empty promises nullifies itself. promises, love, young life, experiences which will last a life. all that you hve brought in here in this poem. thank you. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 January 2016

Love and hate! ! With the common pain seen around. Nice work.

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