Thursday, February 28, 2008

Love When In Hide Comments

Rating: 5.0

tears when rain in pain of sorrow
heart yet blows as when hurt
love seems to be chilled by the shadow
as when lonely and alone clippered by wing
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Dr subhendu kar
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Miriam Maia Padua 29 January 2009

deep words greatly crafted to form into a very brilliant and catching piece touching....trials of a hidden love i can feel the serenity in pain... unable to show the love..... lovely penned....reflects a mystery within...10++++

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Thad Wilk 28 February 2008

A beautiful write Dr. Kar! And Christopher's comment says it all! ! *10*! ! Best regards , Friend Thad

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Broken Peaces 28 February 2008

Dr. your work has a serenity that is so peaceful to the eye I read with no effortonly an inner calmness thankyou Chris 10

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