Tuesday, October 1, 2019

Lovely Traps Comments

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Listen closely to the voice
warning of the lovely traps
those that beckon from beyond
with entreats that promise charms
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Sean Green
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King Crow 01 October 2019

If you sprinkled a few more Rhymes up around the top, and in the middle it'd be an awesome poem. Still good though. :)

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