Loves Cloud Poem by Tango

Loves Cloud

Rating: 5.0


Come, come climb with me,
to the top of loves cloud,
let us drift off together,
ignoring the crowds below,
I love you scream out loud.

Cast off all our inhibitions,
fly naked through the sky.
fly on and on forever,
gazing into each others eyes,
lost in love forever,
just you and I.

Saturday, February 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 20 February 2020

Thanks for introducing me to rime royale. A top-shelf love poem.

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Susan Williams 16 February 2020

Very sensual and yet not offensively at all. It is the love we all dream of- -softly curled up on a cloud and floating above the irritating demands of everyday life... well written! ! ! ! very well written! ! ! 10++++++++

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 February 2020

Nice imagery to celebrate your love. Flying with clouds with the lover must be most amazing thing. 'ly on and on forever, gazing into each others eyes, lost in love forever, just you and I.'... is so nice. Thanks for sharing.

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