Loving Care Poem by Hans Raj Sharma

Loving Care



Brethren!
Take care of-
A moment in tension
Losing care
And self-attention
Devoid of
Understanding
Not a solution
But, confusion
And irritation.

Brethren!
Take care of-
It generates
Non-cooperation
Off-ramping
To complications.
In absence of rider,
Precaution
Or pre-meditation
Relations get sore.

Brethren!
Take care of-
It lacks confidence
Besides, every cure
No prevention
No suggestion
No protection
A danger-zone:
Unsafe due to
Calculated tension.

Brethren!
Take care of-
In good humour
When, it comes first
Right frequency
High on action
In pain and love
A new space:
For men and women
Youth and children.

Brethren!
Take care of-
Safe-zone needs
Preventive cure
Carefree careful
Meditation
And understanding.

-Copyright © hrsharma ®2017
Ludhiana, Punjab, India.

Thursday, April 6, 2017
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Brethren!
Take care of-
Safe-zone needs
Preventive cure
Carefree careful
Meditation
And understanding.
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