Loving You Poem by Lateef Okikiola Imran

Loving You

Rating: 4.5


Here comes the new moon

Shining light to my night

Giving hope amid of doom

And me out of plight



Here comes my sunshine

Nurturing me day by day

At night we turned up to dine

You ease me of pain



You give me a second chance

And played me a new tune to dance

My world being relieved

And my soul being redeemed



I wish you had appear earlier

To have brought me joy over the years

Now I am feeling real voiceless excitement

For these moments are eminent



We'd grow to prove them wrong

And let them know that to ourselves we belonged

I will be water and you the fish

And our reserves would be enriched



Oh! My guiding angel

Not only could my mouth tell

What my soul is wishing

And this is just the beginning.

Tuesday, June 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: emotional
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 June 2016

Beautiful romantic train of thought, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely poem insightfully brought forth. Thanks for sharing Lateef. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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