{loving You} Poem by Lillian Jamison

{loving You}

Rating: 5.0


I close my eyes
I sense you near
I can almost feel you

As you whisper softly
Just what our love means
And how desire grows

I recall your softness
The love in your caress
The smile on your lips

As I am safe and loved
Respected as I am
Never harshly judged

I know that dreams come true
As you hold me near
And I'm loving you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 02 March 2008

A brilliant effort! For sharing your thoughts, thanks.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 March 2008

love seems to be true by the dream when as when embraced by the breath as when whispers jingles by the breath breath yet bessortted as rilling the swing, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , beautiful poem, i like it, kindly read similar poem of mine--AS I CLOSE MY EYES-and kindly ciomment, well penned,10/10, thanmks for sharing

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You fleck a graceful picture of Love's paradox, Lily...Triplet stazaec construction moves with crisp & glide.Well Done, my dear! ~ FjR ~ .03/08.

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Thad Wilk 01 March 2008

A really dreamy poem lillian! ! Love it, a great read! ! ! *10*! ! Thanks for the sharing! ! Best wishes Friend Thad

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